RENGA: United Lomo Poetry

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Renga is a collaborative form of poetry which consists of at least two stanzas, usually more.

The rules are pretty much similar to lyocell’s blog. (New United Lomo Story) I’ll be posting the first two lines of the renga. For those who want to contribute, just post the text and image link in the comment box, and I’ll update it. The lines don’t really have to rhyme or be calculated. You can post as many lines as you want. Let’s make it modern and free verse.

Let the fun begin, lomo peeps!


1. IMAGE (antibiotyx)
2. IMAGE (rav_bunneh)

They say dreaming is like flying
it defies the gravity of life and existence
They say life is like a plate of hot lumpia
you never know what is inside until you take a bite

[Photo:12048336]

3. IMAGE (lyocell)

Sometimes dreams dont have a happy end,
cause we wake up too early

Crédits: lyocell

4. IMAGE (lola_juanlu)
5. IMAGE (kuryzu)

I went deep to pursue
fleeting glimpse of your memory
and try to reach your figure,
recover your graceful comfort

fond memories…
lady-in-waiting

Crédits: lola_juanlu

Crédits: kuryzu

6. IMAGE (herbert-4)
7. IMAGE (brettac)
8. IMAGE (eicalette)

As I walk through the wood, my shoe gets heavy.
Do I want to look?
What’s the difference when all’s said and done?

I find you
finding me

Crédits: herbert-4

Crédits: brettac

Crédits: eicalette

9. IMAGE (brettac)

Contentment, cheerfulness, merriment, gaiety, joy, glee, delight,
good spirits, well-being, enjoyment, exuberance, happiness…
Living life right
gives you the best high

Crédits: brettac

10. IMAGE (azzzy)

Why! why are you so nice?
You should have just left, turn your back on her,
but life is an experience and you’ve made your choice.
Now just see where it will take you.

Crédits: azzzy

11. IMAGE (lawypop)

We were given wings to fly
but some of us afraid to fall
We were given worlds to imagine
but some of us afraid to dream

Crédits: lawypop

12. IMAGE (calvin_hardy)

Mum said girls really powerful,
Dad said girls really mystical,
But i think girls really trouble

Crédits: calvin_hardy

13. IMAGE (kuryzu)

mountain breathing
noon heat shimmers
cool from crevices

Crédits: kuryzu

14. IMAGE (weedos)

Like the cold feeling in my heart
As she left me here
Hoping one day the door will open
To set my heart free

Crédits: weedos

written by antibiotyx on 2011-01-08

19 Comments

  1. rav_bunneh
    rav_bunneh ·

    www.lomography.es/homes/rav_bunneh/photos/12048336
    They say life is like a plate of hot lumpia
    You never know what is inside until you take a bite

  2. lyocell
    lyocell ·

    Sometimes dreams dont have a happy end, cause we wake up too early.
    www.lomography.es/homes/lyocell/photos/12309699

  3. lola_juanlu
    lola_juanlu ·

    www.lomography.es/homes/lola_juanlu/photos/11760158
    I went deep to pursue
    fleeting glimpse of your memory
    and try to reach your figure,
    recover your graceful comfort.

  4. antibiotyx
    antibiotyx ·

    great! just updated it. hoping more will participate. ;)

  5. kuryzu
    kuryzu ·

    www.lomography.es/homes/kuryzu/photos/11929468

    fond memories . . .
    lady-in-waiting

  6. herbert-4
    herbert-4 ·

    As I walk through the wood, my shoe gets heavy.
    Do I want to look?

  7. herbert-4
    herbert-4 ·

    www.lomography.es/homes/herbert-4/albums/103259-descanso_ga… {Sorry, forgot my link!}

  8. brettac
    brettac ·

    What's the difference when all's said and done?
    www.lomography.es/homes/brettac/albums/1662330-lomo-chrome-…

  9. eicalette
  10. brettac
    brettac ·

    Contentment, cheerfulness, merriment, gaiety, joy, glee, delight, good spirits, well-being, enjoyment, exuberance, happiness...
    Living life right
    gives you the best high.
    www.lomography.es/homes/brettac/photos/11972257

  11. antibiotyx
    antibiotyx ·

    update done.

  12. azzzy
    azzzy ·

    Why! why are you so nice?, you should have just left turn your back on her, but life is an experience and you've made your choice. Now just see where it will take you. www.lomography.es/homes/azzzy/photos/12077146

  13. lawypop
    lawypop ·

    we were given wings to fly
    but some of us afraid to fall
    we were given worlds to imagine
    but some of us afraid to dream

    www.lomography.es/homes/lawypop/photos/12291052

  14. antibiotyx
    antibiotyx ·

    updated

  15. calvin_hardy
    calvin_hardy ·

    Mum said girls really powerful,
    Dad said girls really mystical,
    But i think girls really trouble :)
    www.lomography.es/homes/calvin_hardy/photos/12184028

  16. kuryzu
    kuryzu ·

    mountain breathing
    noon heat shimmers
    cool from crevices

    www.lomography.es/homes/kuryzu/photos/11757955

  17. antibiotyx
    antibiotyx ·

    updated

  18. weedos
    weedos ·

    Like the cold feeling in my heart
    As she left me here
    Hoping one day the door will open
    To set my heart free
    www.lomography.es/homes/weedos/photos/12365138

  19. azzzy
    azzzy ·

    "lawypop
    we were given wings to fly
    but some of us afraid to fall
    we were given worlds to imagine
    but some of us afraid to dream
    www.lomograph(…)os/12291052"

    NICE!